Title: The Growing Up Affair
Author: Joolz
Pairing: NS/IK
Rating: PG
Word Count: 9,400
Word Count: 9,400
Archive: StoryGate, Chrome and Gunmetal, File 40
Summary: They were trying to lull her into a sense of security.
Notes: Told entirely from the point of view of an OFC. Thanks to the very nice
ladyra and Jenn for the beta help.
Warnings: None, no graphic sex
The story was too long to post in one piece on my lj and I couldn't figure out how to do the 'part 2' thing, so the link is to my website.
Please do come back and leave a comment!
The Growing Up Affair
The story was too long to post in one piece on my lj and I couldn't figure out how to do the 'part 2' thing, so the link is to my website.
Please do come back and leave a comment!
The Growing Up Affair
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I'm a sucker for hurt/comfort, and I like unusual POVs, so the story was a good fit. I think you did a good job of maturing Clarice in that one night. It might have felt abrupt, but you did a nice job of showing that Clarice was probably on the verge of discovering these things for herself anyway. The ending was satisfying. Yay for lesbians and nerds ;-)
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I'm glad the story worked for you. I like Clarice - she just needed a little shove to open her mind.
Thanks for the comments.