Wow. Just wow. This was totally what I needed to read right now and it so did not disappoint.
You have an amazing gift as a storyteller and I think you captured the voices of the characters perfectly. Especially The Doctor. That whole scene of him working over Jack and all of the scientific thoughts running through his head- just plain brilliant.
I hope that there will be a possible sequel, if not more Ten/Jack fics to come.
*goes off to reread b/c it was just that damn good*
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Date: 2008-07-22 02:40 am (UTC)You have an amazing gift as a storyteller and I think you captured the voices of the characters perfectly. Especially The Doctor. That whole scene of him working over Jack and all of the scientific thoughts running through his head- just plain brilliant.
I hope that there will be a possible sequel, if not more Ten/Jack fics to come.
*goes off to reread b/c it was just that damn good*